Recount

Write your recount here: The strong gust of wind struck me like a hundred racing cars zooming past me. Then, ever so slightly, my hair felt like it was dancing around on my head and then, I suddenly realized that my cap had flown off. The first movement I did was turn around and gasp. Then I saw my cap floating and gliding in the strong wind. As I chased after my cap, a sand storm had formed and pushed my cap further from me. As I chased after it in desperation, I finally caught the hat. A few minutes later, a tremendous gust of wind blows and lifts the cap off my head again. Then, I knew that the hunt begins..again. || || I think I used verbs well. || What could I do to improve my recount? I could put some metaphors and onomatopoeia. ||
 * My "Slice of Life Recount" ||
 * Your task is to write a "Slice of Life" recount using a range of poetic language features. Ensure you use similes, metaphors, personification and onomatopoeia. Using different co lours, highlight your similes using yellow, your metaphors using blue , your onomatopoeia using green and your personification using red. ||
 * Self reflection: I thought that this was good.
 * What did I do well?